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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt">4</span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">、《西沙儿女》本质上是一个动人的爱情故事。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">撇开那些令人讨厌的政治纷争不提(你就是讨论一百年,你也说不清楚是非,所以小平同志提出了“不争论”的观点,这也是没有办法的办法。),我觉得《西沙儿女》是一部动人的、含蓄的、不露声色的爱情故事。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">我想,浩然在写《西沙儿女》时是很有一些困难的。他不熟悉南方生活,如何写西沙战事?张永枚是诗人,可以用诗的朦胧与模糊性来搪塞,而浩然是小说家,他必须写出一个故事,如何构织故事,这是对浩然的最大的考验。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">浩然不愧是久经文艺沙场考验的作家,他巧妙地选择了他的立足点与着力点。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">按理讲,《西沙儿女》的主要内容就是写西沙海战,故事发生在</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt">1974</span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">年,写出各方人等在战争中的表现就行。但是浩然没有这样做,因为这样写的话,只能使小说成为一个报告文学。而实际上,浩然还遇到一个更为困难的问题,就是当时的政治气候,对西沙海战暴露出的我海军的一些不足是只能加以回避的。浩然不可能像李存堡写《高山下的花环》的时候那样,揭示出文革对中越战争带来的负面影响,也不可能像徐怀中写《西线轶事》时那样,表现年轻军人在经过文革后的精神上的迷茫情绪。浩然必须高调地渲染西沙战事的无可挑剔的神圣性。他不能暴露任何问题,这就很明显地意味着,浩然如果仅仅就事论事地表现西沙海战,他基本无法写出波澜起伏的故事情节,更不得不必须直面当时讳莫如深的西沙海战的奇怪之处(如为何我军开始时对该战思想上准备不足,此系因为当时我海军力量主要针对北方苏联人的威胁),最终只能在一个高调上不断地“高,高,高”,这样对作者来说简直是无法下手的。现在从《西沙儿女》的第三部分,也就是海战部分来看,作者并没有把西沙战事的艰巨性与危险性表达清楚。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">史志表明,西沙海战之后,中国海军的格局发生了巨大的变化,军防重点,也从渤海湾移到了南海,实现了从“黄海”到“蓝海”的转变,也就是西沙战事,给中国军队的格局产生了深远的影响,我们的海权意识也在此得以强烈地被激发出来。在西沙战争爆发之时,当时我军准备不足,派出的舰队完全与南越军队不在一个档次,一场交锋下来,我军战舰受伤严重。这些实际困难,显然是浩然在小说中不能加以表现的。甚至《西沙儿女》的海战部分,比</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt">1976</span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">年</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt">5</span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">月拍竣的《西沙风云》还要讳莫如深。在《西沙风云》(这部电影网上可以下载)中,表现了民兵协助我受伤军舰闯滩搁浅的描写,而在《西沙儿女》中是没有的。《西沙儿女》中只有我民兵上舰救火的情节,而没有电影中拯救沉舰的描写。毕竟《西沙风云》是八一电影制片厂拍摄的,可以更多地遵循战争史实,而浩然却显然受到更多的揭橥真实的限制,如果浩然仅仅把目光局限在西沙战事的描写上,他显然找不到任何可以舒展筋骨的空间。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">所以浩然选择了爱情,选择了“儿”与“女”。中国文学历史中,就有《儿女英雄传》,解放后,也有一部《新儿女英雄传》,里面有斗争,但更不缺少“儿女”情。浩然为什么取名《西沙儿女》,当然是因为“儿女”所代表的一个群体的意义,但不容否认的事实是,小说名里还包含着“男孩与女孩”爱情的意义。只是文革期间爱情不可言说,但小说里的字里行间无一不充斥着浓浓的、芬芳而纯美的爱情。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">我觉得浩然在置放他的爱情故事的时间定位上,是深深地动了一番脑筋的。小说故事开始的年代,是抗日战争时期,小说两个主人公阿宝与阿海这时候大概不到十岁,他们在西沙群岛上,相遇相识,结下了深刻的童年情谊,同时,通过他们的眼睛,看到了西沙的历史,看到了他们的长辈如何与日本鬼子作斗争,如何与渔霸作斗争,他们的心心相印,志同道合,小说通过如诗如画的笔触,表现了这两个少男少女在孤岛上相依为命的青梅竹马的岁月。这时候你不能说它是爱情,但那种情谊足以与爱情相媲美。南海的美丽风光与奇异民俗,形成了他们共同的审美情趣,为他们日后走上爱情的道路,成为家庭中的恩爱夫妻奠定了非常深厚的基础。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小说第二部分,就是“奇志篇”中的上卷,已到了五十年代中期,与第一部分相差十多年了,这时候阿宝与阿海都长成了情窦初开的大小伙、大姑娘了,年龄在十七、八岁之间吧。这时候,他们面临着人生的选择的问题,阿宝选择了扎根鱼岛,而阿海参加了海军。他们两个人相互鼓励,互通有无,思想交流不断。虽然他们身处两条线(军与民),但浩然深知必须让人物碰撞,接触,升化,所以小说里设置了许多的情节,继续让阿宝与阿海在青春期里交流、沟通,为他们的爱情的水到渠成做好牵线搭桥工作。可以说,浩然不愧是他的作品里角色的好红娘。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">至少浩然安排了如下的机会,让他笔下的男女主人公相遇,增进了解,产生感情:一是阿宝辞学归岛时,与阿海进行了交流,两人意见相投,在目标选择上是一致的,是志同道合的,这可是爱情的最高状态了。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">二是阿宝组织民兵训练时,阿海身为海军一员,前来辅助训练。这里有相当富有诗情画意的爱情暗示。两个人踏着海岛上的溶溶月色一起回来的时候,虽然谈论的是工作上的问题,但景物描写相当暧昧且富有朦胧诗一般的情境,在文革那样的形势下,小说把爱情表现得隐约可见但又恰到好处,清新宜人:</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">“青春的声音和脚步,从海边响到麻枫林,又响在渔村的街道上。……</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">月光在岛子上倾泻。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">涛声在礁石边起落。……</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">植物的影子,模糊地摇摆着。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">昆虫的叫声,这边停了,那边又响起。……</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">他们又接着默默地往前走。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">月亮高了,身影儿短了。浪涛急了,脚步声轻了。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">含着咸涩味道的海风,凉嗖嗖地刮着,吹着他们的脸,掀着他们的衣襟。”</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">你看,这些描写里饱含着爱情的暧昧气味,如果爱情是水的话,只要我们挤一下这些文字,流下来的都是爱情的纯正的汁液。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">可以说,只有爱情中人,才会把景物联想成如此的优美,如此的拟人,如此的细腻。浩然在这里设身处地进入到爱情儿女中的情感世界,把他们的内心朦胧体验转化为文字,移情到景致,一句话,浩然就是通过这些包容了一对青春男女的共同的风景,而达到了意在言外的爱情表达。“儿”与“女”在同样的景物里源于和风、源于月色而“授受相亲”了,即使不着一词“浪漫”,也尽得人间真情之“风流”了。难怪《剑桥中国史》作者看到了“抒情”,看到了“浪漫”,这就是学者的识力。不服不行。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">三是阿宝在珊瑚岛上建桥的时候,阿海前来支援,两人不谋而合,出于童年时在一起的共同经历,设想了同样的栈桥方案。用两人对方案的不谋而合来暗示他们之间的情投意合。小说在这里也用了许多暗示的话来表达:</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">“储蓄着许许多多金光碧彩的记忆的湖泊,被这几句话启开了闸门,涌在符海龙的眼间,掠过符海龙的心头。”</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">这句话明白无误地表现了阿海对阿宝的爱情感觉,过去的记忆、现在的沟通,一同涌现,产生了情感的共振的涟漪。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">四是在发生海啸的时候,阿宝与阿海共同抢险,危难见真情,他们的感情也就瓜熟蒂落了。小说表现阿海归队时,又用了这样的含蓄的暗示:</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">“热烈地送行,难舍难离呀!</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">在这个时候,年轻人真正懂得了什么是战友的感情,而战友的感情又是怎样建树起来的。”</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">如果我们把这个“战友”置换成“恋人”,显然更加合理。浩然打造的这段西沙浪漫爱情,在此完成了它的全部的跨越十多年的旅程。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小说里至少两处出现了“爱情”这个词。“奇志篇”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt">108</span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">页,“这以后,敌人的枪声,亲人的鲜血,培育着她的爱情,铸造着她的奇志。”这个词汇,在当时来说简直是不可思议的。当然这里出现的爱情,是对西沙的感情,但浩然显然在这里有意地误用了一下,给人以浮想联翩之感。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小说第三部分,这时候已经是</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt">1974</span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">年了。阿宝与阿海的年龄大致在三十岁左右。他们结了婚,有了自己的孩子。小说表现他们相遇时,用了这样的句子,“阿宝又悄悄地告诉她的爱人”。注意,这里用的是爱人。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">可以说,浩然通过爱情这条副线,把西沙之战的当时纪事,转化为一个历史的长线,伸入到历史深处,一线串珠地串联起抗战、五十年代及西沙战事这些“跳岛般”的历史纪年,展现了人物从童年、青年到成年之后的三段情感区间,使小说的故事背景有了纵深,情感波纹有了动人的力量。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">这就是“剑桥史”作者看到的“浪漫主义”的力量吧,但是国内的那些评论家是看不到的。如果我们的评论是故意看不到尚情有可愿,如果我们评论家的真的看不到,那么,充分说明我们的研究人员的素质是如此低级,因此,产生“文革学”在海外,敦煌学在海外的奇怪现象,也就不足为怪了。</span></p><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'"><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt">5</span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">、《西沙儿女》中的历史纵深感。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">从表层来看,《西沙儿女》反映的时间从抗战时期到</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt">1974</span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">年,但小说中通过曲折起伏的主线索,通过人物的对话与交流,让小说里的内在时空向历史深处推进,几乎使小说成为一本中国南海历史书。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小说在人物对话中,最早交代了汉代时中国人对西沙的开发史,在人物的对白中,涉入到三元里抗英,涉及到郑和下西洋时对南海的拥有,而这些历史知识的描写,是放置在小说的主要线索的冲突中逐步展开的,并不给人累赘多余的感觉,小说把历史置放于现实的层面里,述说着中国人对西沙群岛主权与海权的不容置疑的拥有权。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">小说抗日战争部分,据浩然自我介绍,沿用了他家乡的抗日故事,但是当这些抗日的情节放置在南海的岛屿中时,便产生了一种独特的传奇风采。在小说“正气篇”里,我们可以看到,通过一对男孩与女孩的视角,表现了对岛屿中文物的发现,借此展现了西沙群岛的奇异的风情。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">全力贬低《西沙儿女》的章明先生称:“(《西沙儿女》是)把木麻黄写成‘马尾松’的拙劣不堪之作。”不排除浩然由于对南中国海的陌生而出现一些错误,但从小说中可以看出,浩然竭尽所能地掌握了众多的资料,以展示西沙群岛的神奇的动植物风貌。在“正气篇”第</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt">12</span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">节中,浩然通过诗意的语言,全景式地描写了西沙群岛富有特色的热带植物:这里有“丛生的羊角树,粗犷的麻枫桐,挺拔的马尾松(可能这就是章明先生所说的错误吧——引者注),强硬的西沙藤,尤其多的是年高寿长的野海棠树,……”</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">试想一下,那些指出《西沙儿女》是拙劣之作的人,他们又为祖国的南海向全国人民介绍了什么?如果按照他们的逻辑,那么,中国南海的奇异风貌至今仍处于雪藏无人知晓的状况,中国海军维护中国海权的英勇壮举,可能永远不会为人们注目,那一帮充满着人性味的“儿”与“女”们,他们生长在珊瑚礁上的爱情所支撑起来的反击侵略者的动力,就将永远地湮没在南海的波涛中。这样的话,是否那些批判者就觉得很有成就感呢?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">说《西沙儿女》情节是胡编滥造,恰恰相反,小说展示的一系列中国人民维护祖国完整的斗争,恰恰是中国历史上不容抹杀的一笔。浩然把那些枯燥的断裂的中国人民开发南海的历史,通过他的生动的形象,娓娓道来,给人一种栩栩如生的感觉。我们仿佛觉得,真有那么一对男孩与女孩,在西沙的孤岛上携手展开他们的童年、青年以及充满抒情浪漫风格的爱情篇章,有了这些令我们感到亲切的人物的加萌,我们才会去感知南海的美丽,因为很简单的事实是,我们只有感知到生命本身的美丽,才会去热爱那个环境,正如古语有云:“西湖七月半一无可看,只可看看七月半之人。”是人活化了环境,是人激发了环境的美丽。我们在小说中设计的鲜活、纯真、直率而又美丽的“儿女”们的群像的引导下,去感知到南海战事的意义所在,去体味那群儿女为了祖国的领土与海权所作出的无私的奉献与牺牲。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">在《西沙儿女》中,我们可以看到,浩然牵线出的从历史到现在的无数线索,都在说明着中国人所具有的顽强与坚强的守土有责的性格,当所有的历史的积淀作用于</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt">1974</span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">年的这一特殊的碰撞的时候,历史锻造的中华民族的坚强,铸就了今天中华儿女的抵御外侮的神圣壮举。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">我想,面对着小说里打造的这一核心价值体系,如果我们再去纠缠那些所谓的局部的毒性,去离开小说的文本本身,而去关注小说创作的幕后背景,那么,我们能说这样的舍本逐末的方式就是实是求事的原则吗?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">我不想夸耀《西沙儿女》是一部多么伟大的小说,它的确有许多缺点,有许多粉饰,但是,我们想一想,在离开了粉饰之后,我们又有多少作家去表现过南海风云?中国的南海,从上世纪七十年代至今,又发生过多少风云变幻,但看看我们的影视作品又有多少去选择了这样的题材,去展现中国人为维护这片蔚蓝色海域的安宁所付出的牺牲?我们与美国军机在南空上空玩弄的猫捉老鼠式的游戏</span> <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">,有没有被我们的文艺作品所反映?中国海军与越南围绕着南海堡礁的战斗,又有多少被我们的影视作品所折射?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">遗憾的是,中国的南海,在我们的文艺作品中,日益像一个失语者。自从浩然之后,完全是一片可怜而又可悲的空白。那些叫嚣浩然作品拙劣的人,试问一下,你又为祖国的强盛做出过什么贡献?为强化海权意识做过什么事情?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">所以,我现在很容易理解浩然说过的他不会为写过《西沙儿女》这样的小说而后悔。因为,我觉得浩然没有什么值得后悔。他至少通过他的小说,使我们认识了南海的美丽风情,使我们知道我们“海南岛南边的南海”(《西沙儿女》开篇的第二句。几乎与“云南之南”一样耐人咀嚼。)中有一帮中国儿女用他们的付出、他们的奉献与牺牲,在无声地守护着我们辽阔的海防,使我们知道了我们被西沙之战激发起来的勃兴的海权意识,使我们更清晰地了解了西沙的今天是如何从昨天走过来的。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">在这一点上不得不说的是,如果说文革是一种左,一种偏激,把所有的无关政治的事情,都拉扯到政治上来,从而使来本来纯粹技术上的东西,都被迫进行过滤选择,那么,我们今天有一些人,依然用政治的过滤网,在进行蛮横的抛弃有益于我们国家、有益于我们民族的一些有价值的思想与精神。这是不是一种左的遗风。今年党和政府提出继续“解放思想”,其实我们回头看一看,解放思想是一种全面的立体的要求,当前的一些几十年如一日的文学史家们,有没有必要解放一下思想?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">不错,《西沙儿女》是急就章,有其叙述上的简陋,所以浩然通过诗意的描述来回避写实的细节描写,但是,我们能否因为它的不足,就能否论它对中国南海儿女的激情叙述?这不仅使我想到了当年肖军在写出《八月的租界》之后,张春桥在上海的租界里发出了冷冷的怪调:“田军不该早早地从东北回来!”</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">这一句话,与广州城里的那位章明先生说的何其一样。他说浩然《西沙儿女》“是以超常的速度赶造出来的”。鲁迅写出了经典的《八月的租界》一文,对张春桥之流进行了尖锐的讽刺。其实我们想一下,浩然到南海,表现中华儿女打击侵略者与肖军在东三省描写中华儿女抗击日本鬼子侵略有着惊人的南北对应。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">浩然写《西沙儿女》只用了一个多月,这也被当成诟病浩然的一个主要罪状,好像时间短就不能成为优秀的作品似的。其实从《西沙儿女》文末所列的时间表来看,浩然仅修改小说,就用了二个月的时间,而前面写作这个小说至少也有二个月吧,加上修改时间,少说也有三个月。这么长的时间,对于一个作家来说,是完全可以写出一部三十万字的作品的。因此用时间短,就指责《西沙儿女》的缺陷,那是没有什么实际意义的。当代有一位作家,不是用了十多天写成了一本书了吗?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt">6</span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">、浩然的语言的弹性所带来的普适性。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">浩然的语言是取自于口语,对北方口语的熟悉,使他的语言不纯粹是标准的译文体、书面语。在文革期间,使用译文体、书面语进行文革文学创作的作家,几乎无一不是折乾沉沙。谌容、张抗抗这些作家在文革中所撰写的小说,带有太明显的书生语气,也就是从书本上学到的语言基本功。所以他们努力想写出全景式的立体场面,但明显功力不足,后来这些女作家离开社会性的描述而专注于个人内心世界的发现,便发挥了她们的书面语、译文体的特长,而相对而言,文革后的浩然所写作的一些表现人物心理的作品,明显逊色于文革期间的作品。文革后浩然的小说由于口语的过浓的味道,带有一种民间文学的色彩,故事也颇引人,叙述也无可挑剔,但是,它就是达不到个人叙述的那种亲和性,就像一个民间工作者进城后去表述人物的内心的隐秘,他是永远赶不上那些学生出身的书面语的熟稔掌握者的。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">用口语写作在今天中国作家里,最闻名者当数王朔与莫言。他们的口语基本功好,再掺进一些后进的书面语,立刻妙语联珠,梦笔生花。可见,口语基础好的作者,经过稍微调教一下,适应能力非常强。浩然作为一个北方作者,他写南方生活,就是用他的口语化的风格,掺入南海的地域性风貌,便构成了小说的独特的语言。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">口语作者都有一个特点,就是他的口语词汇不够的时候,就会移用书面语中的似是而非的语词,从而使他们的语言灵动而出人意料。莫言就是如此,“红高梁”中大量正词歪用,达到很好的修饰效果。而这种“正词歪用”的方式,在王朔那里运用得更是炉火纯青。浩然在写《西沙儿女》的时候,也在语言叙述中采用了这种方法,他基础上的良好的口语感觉,再配以这种移用的词汇,便构成了浩然的不拘一格的语言风格,一些词汇的应用,超越了译文体作者与书面语作者的那种墨守成规的老套用词原则,从而使得《西沙儿女》里凭空生出几份洋气来。比如,“正气篇”第</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt">35</span><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">页:“缄默无声的大海,又不安地鼓动起来了。”这里这个“鼓动”就十分传神,它就把一个政治术语移用到了自然景物描写中来了,给人一种新鲜的语感刺激,发展到莫言时代,作家都有意识地运用“通感”技巧来增加语言搭配的新鲜感与爆发力了。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10pt"><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:'times new roman';mso-hansi-font-family:'times new roman'">这样的谴词造句风格在小说里比比皆是,我就不例举了。事实证明,诗意的语言,能产生一种节奏与跳跃感。不作细节描述,虽然会带来信息上的缺失,但反而会达到一种大写意的气势美。海明威的小说喜欢用短句,勾勒出的是快速进展的叙事节奏,十分富有动感。而古龙小说的那种跳跃式的节奏与律动的语感,也在说明着浩然在《西沙儿女》中采用的语言风格是可行的,也是符合文学创作规律的。在文革那个文学审美严重受阻的年代,浩然的《西沙儿女》简直可以称之为石破天惊的美文。即使在今天看来,小说里的一些诗意的奇思妙想,状物的简洁有力,描写的绘声绘色,都仍不失其先锋意义。它应该在中国文学的音律美与语言美的探索与创新中,留下它应有的地位。</span></p></span><br /><br /><img src="&#102;ile:///4b5cd70344963681fa84b.jpg" alt="" /><br /> [此帖子已经被作者于[lastedittime]1249343764[/lastedittime]编辑过] |